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Intricately-Ordinary Finished My Poem Commission!

Journal Entry: Sun Feb 24, 2013, 10:26 PM
  • Mood: Pride


Poop In My Belly Button


By intricately-ordinary

i am so empty, fill me up
with everything you have to offer:
the degenerations of a dying soul,
the waste of a like-minded

meanderer; you know me, and as
the room spins, your eyes are
alive. make me whole in
my hollowest of holes,

hallowed be the man who can
turn me to the filth I seem and
who enjoys it all the same,

participating in this Filet-o-Fish
masquerade of sentiment and
supplicants; sacraments undignified--
make me feel alive

with your feces.



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Contradictory55 Feb 26, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my gosh, your talent knows no bounds! :love:
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Natural-NW Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Dude that was amazing but just XD
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DojangDoll Feb 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
So awesome!!!! Wasn't expecting it at all, but it's just great!
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forestmeetwildfire Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You know, other than the title and the last stanza, this seems like a perfectly normal poem. I would have been extremely surprised by the ending had I not seen the title O.O
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:iconintricately-ordinary:
Truly beautiful.
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:iconintricately-ordinary:
You have so much talent :heart:
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:iconintricately-ordinary:
thank you :iconloveloveplz:
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hgfdsasdfgh Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh gosh, Maddie, glad to see you're okay! :tighthug: I heard your head was swollen; how is it?
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:iconintricately-ordinary:
I got 13 whole points
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hgfdsasdfgh Mar 1, 2013  Student General Artist
XD
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